I love it! Wow! So creative and brilliant. I love your portrayl of Pettunia. There has to be more to her character than is revealed in the books, like what you've written. And the idea of her and Remus...I adore that. The two outcasts. One entirely too normal and the other an oddity amongst his kind, a wizard werewolf.

I think that the gentle nature of Petunia was embittered by her marriage to Vernon. But they do love each other, so thats kind of cool. And Remus will end up with Tonks, which is cute.

And I love your Sirius! He's the best! I love his cocky attitude and his brazen personality!