Mmm... Lovely. It's full of such sadistic imagery it almost makes you like Naraku. It kind of gives me the image of a cat who insists that the dead rat laid at your feet should be cherished rather then 'ewed' over and thrown away.
I also like the symbolic imagery of sunsets and dusk, no matter if you meant it or not. Red as love or red as anger/hate/blood and then the descent of Kikyou's enjoyment of sunsets into despair mirroring the fading sunset itself. Very well put together, IMO.
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on 2006-01-17 12:57 am (UTC)I also like the symbolic imagery of sunsets and dusk, no matter if you meant it or not. Red as love or red as anger/hate/blood and then the descent of Kikyou's enjoyment of sunsets into despair mirroring the fading sunset itself. Very well put together, IMO.
/fangirl moment