...all of the other dragons used to laugh and call him names they never let poor Ryouji play in any dragon games~!
...Whoops, wrong fandom. (But I just couldn't resist after the first scene. xD)
Otherwise, very amusing and fairly enjoyable. There were a few times that your sentence phrasing was awkward, and it threw me off a little. However... Your characterization of Sessmom was lovely. I could totally see her making up a name on the spot, and that was definitely my favorite part (the ending following right behind). She's made up of all sorts of awesomeness like that, and you caught that nicely. Kudos to you for making me want to go reread the Sessmom arc now. =)
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used to laugh and call him names
they never let poor Ryouji
play in any dragon games~!
...Whoops, wrong fandom. (But I just couldn't resist after the first scene. xD)
Otherwise, very amusing and fairly enjoyable. There were a few times that your sentence phrasing was awkward, and it threw me off a little. However... Your characterization of Sessmom was lovely. I could totally see her making up a name on the spot, and that was definitely my favorite part (the ending following right behind). She's made up of all sorts of awesomeness like that, and you caught that nicely. Kudos to you for making me want to go reread the Sessmom arc now. =)