Usually I tend to shy away from first person fics because it's really difficult to voice the characters correctly, but you did a great thing with this. Just like in The Beach, it shows her disregard for what Ursa thought about her, maybe thinking she might have cared, but reverting back to say that she didn't. I really liked the fact that you explored that concept here.
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ninetydegrees
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on 2008-04-12 06:24 am (UTC)