ext_46425 ([identity profile] cold-queen-5.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quirkysmuse 2008-06-04 03:18 pm (UTC)

It's good!

I love that their relationship is already really in motion when the story begins. This isn't about, really, how they got together, but more how they ended.

In fact, in a way, this feels almost like...polaroids? Snippets of time that show just a brief glimpse of what happened in String Theory. It's got a nice rhythm to it though that keeps them all coming together.

I like it.

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