ext_221106 ([identity profile] salomesensei.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quirkysmuse 2008-06-23 10:05 pm (UTC)

Beautiful prose -- phrasing, language, style.
Focus on Kikyou's troubled POV and her role as catalyst are both compelling. Nicely done.

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