The door opened, and she caught the sunlight color of his hair.
^^That's just lovely.^^ This is so deliciously Haruhi. If she ever decided to confess to him (and I doubt he'll give her the chance), she would totally do it like this. With all kinds of rationalizing and trying to find a way out of it and uncharacteristic nervousness and then finally she'd just say it. And actually, I disagree with angel_of_summer; I really, really like where this ends. Ending it right there crystallizes the theme perfectly. In sum, bravo!
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on 2008-09-18 10:42 pm (UTC)^^That's just lovely.^^ This is so deliciously Haruhi. If she ever decided to confess to him (and I doubt he'll give her the chance), she would totally do it like this. With all kinds of rationalizing and trying to find a way out of it and uncharacteristic nervousness and then finally she'd just say it. And actually, I disagree with