ext_19679 ([identity profile] cherazz22784.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quirkysmuse 2008-09-26 04:54 pm (UTC)

Wow! Fucking brilliant! I was completely enraptured reading this. You wrote them both so so well, even Peter too! Wonderful flow and transition. When it ended, I was left painfully wanting more. I can only wish that Claire gets to meet him.

"It's been too long for both of them. Adam hasn't felt a spark in his heart since loving a long dead princess in Japan. Claire hasn't felt anything but yearning for pain, but when Adam touches her and fills her, he leaves her skin aching for pleasure and not an elusive pain. She settles into him as if she's finally found her fit in this puzzle of the world."
--- Oh my god, this is beautiful! Perfect! Especially how she found how she fits into the puzzle. The wording is fantastic!

""Claire..." His voice sounds like silk wrapping around her ears - just as always."
--- *shivers* God, what his voice does to me *fans self*

I love your icon too by the way! *adds fic to memories*

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