I think you meant to say that Bill was gripping the steering wheel HARD enough to break it. Left out a word, LOL.

It's good, I like it. You've obviously got more affection for Jessica than I do (I absolutely hate her. I don't mind them deviating from the books, there's a couple things I'd DEFINITELY have not done...(LAFEYETTE!!!! I MISS THEEEEEEE!!!)...but...I don't know where they're going with Jessica and she's incredibly...hilarious, but still irritating.

Still...good story.

Also, LOVE Hoyt in this. I can totally see him doing this.