I think you meant to say that Bill was gripping the steering wheel HARD enough to break it. Left out a word, LOL.
It's good, I like it. You've obviously got more affection for Jessica than I do (I absolutely hate her. I don't mind them deviating from the books, there's a couple things I'd DEFINITELY have not done...(LAFEYETTE!!!! I MISS THEEEEEEE!!!)...but...I don't know where they're going with Jessica and she's incredibly...hilarious, but still irritating.
Still...good story.
Also, LOVE Hoyt in this. I can totally see him doing this.
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on 2008-12-27 02:45 am (UTC)It's good, I like it. You've obviously got more affection for Jessica than I do (I absolutely hate her. I don't mind them deviating from the books, there's a couple things I'd DEFINITELY have not done...(LAFEYETTE!!!! I MISS THEEEEEEE!!!)...but...I don't know where they're going with Jessica and she's incredibly...hilarious, but still irritating.
Still...good story.
Also, LOVE Hoyt in this. I can totally see him doing this.