Oh, yay! Paul/Mellie (albeit unrequited, but still)! I was really hoping someone would write them and this is just lovely! She's so quaint and lovelorn, waiting on a man who can't seem to give her the consideration she needs, yet she can't seem to pull away. I really hope they get him to at least *see* her soon since she's very sweet. And yes, she's not dumb enough to not see what she's doing as a bit of stalking, but too positive to let such thoughts get her down.
Note to Paul: when you come home next? TURN LEFT! LOL
Thanks so much for writing the challenge at dollhouseflash!
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on 2009-03-06 07:48 pm (UTC)Note to Paul: when you come home next? TURN LEFT! LOL
Thanks so much for writing the challenge at
Very nicely done!