Your Nathan is diabolical, and I love it! It's nice to read a fic about Tracy, it seems like she doesn't get much love from us fanficcers, and after reading this I think she should. You gave her some real depth and character here and I liked that. I actually like this pairing because I feel like Peter's naivete gets balanced out by Tracy's machinations.

I enjoyed the line about Tracy and Nathan being so alike it made Peter uncomfortable. ;)

Well done! ♥