ext_98851 ([identity profile] obiwahn.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quirkysmuse 2009-03-13 11:42 pm (UTC)

Ooh, I really like this. I love the exchanges between our core three actives, and Boyd's concern for Echo.

Boyd imagines dolls in tea parties like this, it’s eerily quaint, and he knows that most Handlers would turn away without concern.

Indeed, most Handlers would probably turn away in disgust.

I love how you make Echo sing :-) Maybe music is a kind of instinct too? Anyway, it's a delightful image - her singing and everyone watching, but she being completely un-self-conscious about it.

great job!

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