ext_275979 ([identity profile] dauting.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quirkysmuse 2009-07-08 08:11 am (UTC)

Wow ... Hot. I can actually picture the look on Claire's face in that last confrontation there with her naked and staring down Peter.

This takes the theme and approaches it from more than just one perspective: Peter seeing the 'danger' Claire's in; Claire realizing Peter's true intentions; Peter getting a good portion of eye!candy; Claire forcing Peter to see the situation for what it really is. There's probably more I've overlooked, but I'm impressed with what I can readily see already.

Good luck with the challenge!

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