http://kaitlia777.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kaitlia777.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quirkysmuse 2009-12-01 08:08 pm (UTC)

Oh, this is lovely! I like how you captured Jack's inner conflict, even as he thinks he's dying
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