on 2010-04-27 02:40 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sakura-no-mi.livejournal.com
Great story overall, but this:

They steal away the night and sit on a rooftop, and he looks at her like she's the last woman on earth, like she's the only one that will ever matter in times like these...

Gave me chills. Nice work on this :)
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