I think my favorite parts of this may be the things you don't say. They're such a subtle duo, Kyouya and Eclair, so it is suitable that there is so much darkness (figurative and otherwise) in this piece. I love how nothing about the hotel is explained. I love how intentions are never revealed. I love how we don't know why Eclair assumes that Kyouya is there to lay down an offer (rather than an ultimatum), only that she does so, and correctly. And I love that we don't know her response.
Favorite line: Their eyes meet, and Eclair searches for softness.
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on 2010-07-14 07:50 am (UTC)Favorite line: Their eyes meet, and Eclair searches for softness.