Oh! That was great! The scenes in Coyote Sands were horrible. And the way you made Noah - equally horrible but believable. As was the interaction between Elle, Sylar, and Noah. I like how you explained Noah and Sandra's deaths, and Claire's anger towards Sylar that we see in IABD. I could comment on the whole fic! This was a great way to spend my evening. Thanks for the link. I cannot wait to see the sequel. Cheers!
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ninetydegrees
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on 2011-09-02 12:24 am (UTC)