And I would have gotten away with it, too, if it wasn't for those meddling kids ;-) :-)
Nice chapter.
One typo I spotted, a "e" at the end of with:
“It’s her spell book,” Madison said, briefly meeting Henry’s eyes before she rifled through the pages. The girl frowned as she read. “As I suspected, it’s lower magic. She was trifling withe some very dark stuff.”
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on 2010-12-12 03:41 pm (UTC)Nice chapter.
One typo I spotted, a "e" at the end of with:
“It’s her spell book,” Madison said, briefly meeting Henry’s eyes before she rifled through the pages. The girl frowned as she read. “As I suspected, it’s lower magic. She was trifling withe some very dark stuff.”