Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comments.
I'm not sure if it was intended to be funny, but imagining Joshua saying "What shall I do if she disrobes in front of me again?" made me laugh out loud.
Ah, it was supposed to be subtle humor but yeah, I'm glad it made you laugh.
I wanted the story to go on so I'd know what Joshua would do if/when Lisa disrobes in front of him again!
Yeah, my evil brain's way of nudging me to write a sequel, because that would be fun. =]
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on 2011-02-24 08:59 pm (UTC)I'm not sure if it was intended to be funny, but imagining Joshua saying "What shall I do if she disrobes in front of me again?" made me laugh out loud.
Ah, it was supposed to be subtle humor but yeah, I'm glad it made you laugh.
I wanted the story to go on so I'd know what Joshua would do if/when Lisa disrobes in front of him again!
Yeah, my evil brain's way of nudging me to write a sequel, because that would be fun. =]
Thanks again!