ext_104604 ([identity profile] smittenrosebud.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quirkysmuse 2011-04-25 08:33 pm (UTC)

This was awesome!

You have Rachel's voice down perfectly. I loved her stubborn refusal to quit the play and her matter-of-fact "she was going to play Sarah Brown, and her teacher would just have to gracefully quit his role". And this line:
“Besides, you’d just make me sit in the backseat like I was eight again.”
made me laugh so hard!

Will's reasons for wanting to be in the musical were very valid ones (and I think ones he should definitely be exploring on the show - the man needs a hobby!). I liked the camaraderie between them during rehearsal. Will is essentially the most inappropriate teacher alive, so the part where he punches her on the arm after kissing her felt so true to character.

The kiss itself was wonderful, and the closing line was just perfect. Fabulous job all 'round! :)

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