on 2011-06-26 03:41 pm (UTC)
Well that was great! I hate the idea of Amy and the Doctor "like that", but I got completely sucked into this story. You built some great tension when Amy starts to sidle up to him and I was totally engaged in her pov. Wonderful! The voices were perfect.
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