ext_19446 ([identity profile] dancingdragon3.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quirkysmuse 2011-10-18 11:03 pm (UTC)

Nice look into Claire here. She is so complicated. She sees herself as a good guy, yet eagerly wants to torture someone. You make it clear that she has completely deluded herself into thinking Elle deserves it. Claire is living in such a dark place and you show that so well.

I am really sympathizing with Elle here. I am afraid to "turn the page." (Great job at evoking emotions out of your reader!)

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