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Fandom: Heroes
Title: A Stranger's Gain
Characters/Pairings: Claire POV, Peter/Niki, Claire-->Peter implied, Petrellis mentioned
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 572
Warnings: lightly implied incest feelings
Spoilers: You're good if you've seen Season One
Notes: Done for [livejournal.com profile] 13_fears Xenophobia: Fear of Strangers prompt
Claims Table: http://quirkysmuse.livejournal.com/123687.html

Summary: Claire doesn't like Peter's new girlfriend.



A Stranger's Gain


Claire doesn't like Peter's new girlfriend, but she tries to not let it ruin her graduation.

At first, she feels miffed that Peter would bring an "outsider" to her graduation - an event she considers precious and rewarding for all the hardships she's endured. She doesn't mind if the entire Petrelli family is here; Angela, Nathan, Heidi, her half-brothers, and then Peter too. However, when she glances behind her to catch Peter's eye, she's surprised to see a tall leggy blond sitting next to him, holding his hand and resting her head on his shoulder.

Though as much as she tries, she can't shake the anger, and the rest of the day she feels like a twisted knot. She goes up to get her diploma, setting aside her thoughts of Peter's girlfriend and giving the world the brightest smile she can. She, after all, deserves it. She wants Peter to see her happy and bright, beyond the sad little girl he considers her.

And when she steps out of the exit line to her family, she's scared and not ready to meet the woman who has captured her Peter's heart. She bites her lip, and the woman extends her hand before she can hug Peter.

"Hi, I'm Niki Sanders," she says warmly. And the woman looks her over, and Claire notices she has a sadness behind her face - much like Claire does.

She takes the woman's hand, smiles, and her world falls into a daze. She can't look at Niki and Peter too deeply, so she separates herself from everyone, tightening her soul inside a little cocoon. If she lets go, she knows she'll just cry. She'll cry because she's always known this would happen; she can never have Peter the way she wants to and he can never have her.

Claire doesn't want to cry on her graduation day, so she smiles and wishes Niki and Peter the best. Her uncle seems relieved, and Claire knows he's not using his powers well enough. He's blinded by his new romance, this shining woman right beside him - a place Claire can never be.

Peter gives the woman a quick kiss to her lips; Niki giggles, and Claire secretly wishes Peter would delve a little deeper into her mind and know her true feelings.

But she knows he'll never do that. Peter respects her too much to dig into her heart - one of the million traits she so sorely loves about him.

When her father invites the Petrellis over to dinner, Claire gives him a sour look and Angela catches it. Her grandmother remarks that they have to catch their flight and that Claire already looks tired.

Claire gives her grandmother a grateful smile before they leave. Peter gives her one last hug, and Niki says she's glad to have met her. Claire only smiles but tunes her out. She doesn't want to know that voice; she doesn't want to even look at her face so she turns away. The Petrellis leave, and Claire can only stare at Peter's back.

She knows that's she's going to see him even less now. The phone calls will be less and less. The endearments will turn cold and sparse - ringing more like family and less like the cheerleader he's destined to save.

And the time and space between them will become wide - the light of his life owned by a stranger.

END

on 2007-06-19 10:29 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] airspaniel.livejournal.com
I really just want to grab Claire here and give her a hug. It's devastating to see her hope get crushed so completely. But it's very well written. ^_^

on 2007-06-19 11:59 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yeah I was really brutal to Claire wasn't I? Hopefully I can make it up to her. XD

on 2007-06-26 06:12 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] tardisinthesgc.livejournal.com
Hug Claire, slap Niki.

on 2007-06-26 06:17 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
Awww! Don't slap Niki. She's my girl. *pouts*

I love 'em both.

Nice story!

on 2007-06-20 12:16 am (UTC)
Posted by (Anonymous)
It made me want to plot with Claire to break Peter and Niki up!

Re: Nice story!

on 2007-06-20 01:22 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
Thank you. Haha, that's not a bad idea.

on 2007-06-20 02:01 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] shimmeree.livejournal.com
Blah Niki and Peter! BLAH!

Very well done. I felt so bad for Claire.

on 2007-06-20 02:04 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
Hahaha, come on now. I don't mind them together and even better if Claire's sandwiched in there somewhere.
XDD

Yeah I was WAY too brutal on Claire. I need to make it up to her.

on 2007-06-20 02:31 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] shalinilahiri.livejournal.com

I was so sad to see Claire's hopes be crushed, but you wrote it beautifully. Thanks!

on 2007-06-20 02:50 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
Thanks so much.

YaY

on 2007-06-20 05:08 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] themoviegrrl.livejournal.com
Yeeeah, gonna make a mad dash of a comment because I know I'll be in the minority here. Anyhow, LOVED IT as usual, but I'm sure you're not surprised though. Now, I'll tell you why I think it's great. Objectively, you've really set up a fitting scenario. Is it out of the realm of possibility that this could happen? No. Claire went through a traumatizing time in her life when she met Peter. Naturally, she'll want to think she and he will always be exclusive and special. Ugh, no pun intended. And they do, but people have all kinds of relationships, it doesn't make the ones we have to our loved ones any less when we welcome a new person into our lives. Claire is getting a dose of reality, and she doesn't like it. I say, Claire-bear, it's okay. Have a good cry. It'll be okay.

As far as Niki's portrayal? BRAVO! Thank you for not writing her as this freakin' walking target for everyone's angst. And I love that you kept her real and true. The fact that she isn't this perfect person as some would have written it in contrast to Claire. I.E. Claire bright and shiny, Niki bad and bitchy. I think Claire and Niki can learn and discover a lot more about who they are from one another. Now if only Claire would be able to move past this momentary sadness and jealousy I think this opens the doors for some fun scenes. Like I was thinking of the fanfic where you wrote about Peter and Niki getting married, and Claire's perspective on it.

It feels like this is the beginning and that fic is kind of the ending. So maybe some drabble in-between would be fun! I know you got the knack for it! :)

Whew! Done! Now running back to the community! Thanx for posting this :)

Re: YaY

on 2007-06-20 06:24 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
Whoohoo! So glad you liked it.

I think if Claire and Niki meet in the series they'd have a wonderful dynamic. Both of them are admirable characters and I'd like to show that, even through adversity.
I'd never be rotten to Niki's character, you know that! XD She's my favorite girl. ^^

I'll hopefully be writing more Peter and Niki soon, but other weird ships are accosting me (I have some strange ones, believe me) as well as other stuff. *_* So many bunnies so little time...

Thanks again!

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