quirkysmuse: (mirsan)
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Fandom: Inuyasha
Title: A Line of His Own
Characters/Pairings: Miroku, Shippou, village girl
Rating: G
Word Count: 100
Warnings: None
Notes: Done for [livejournal.com profile] forthrightly's Valentine's Come-On challenge. I haven't done one of her challenges in a long time. =)

Summary: Miroku gives Shippou pointers.



A Line of His Own

Shippou was staring shyly at a village girl, so Miroku decided to give him pointers. He leaned over and whispered a line for Shippou to use. His cheeks flushed hotly.

“Got it?” Shippou approached the girl cautiously as Miroku watched.

When Shippou came back to Miroku, he was grinning and the girl was waiting for him.

“Did it work?”

“Oh, I didn’t use your line, Miroku. I told her I was rescuing her from a perverted monk. Thanks for the help!” Shippou left him with a smug grin.

Miroku pouted; he didn’t appreciate being the joke for Shippou’s romantic success.

on 2009-02-10 02:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] takadai-no-tora.livejournal.com
Maybe someday Miroku will stop underestimating Shippou...nah, probably not!

on 2009-02-10 02:44 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
Haha, right. But where's the fun in that? At least in Shippou's case.

on 2009-02-11 02:43 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] wrathofangels2.livejournal.com
LOL! Classic Shippou! That little guy is way smarter than anyone gives him credit for.

on 2009-02-11 03:01 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
Thanks for the comment! I totally agree about Shippou. He is way clever. :D

on 2009-02-12 01:40 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kmoaton.livejournal.com
I'm glad Shippo came up with his own line. Miroku's line could have got him slapped! LOL

on 2009-02-12 02:50 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
Yeah, haha, I think Shippou has seen Sango slap Miroku enough not to trust his one-liners. :D

on 2010-05-09 01:31 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] neon-chandelier.livejournal.com
Hehe. A case of monkey-see monkey-don't do it! LOL. Smart little Shippou.

on 2010-05-09 04:04 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com
thanks for reading

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