quirkysmuse: (sylar-2)
quirkysmuse ([personal profile] quirkysmuse) wrote2009-12-02 03:22 pm
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Heroes, "This Time" Sylar/Elle, rated PG-13

Fandom: Heroes
Title: This Time
Author: Paynesgrey
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Sylar/Elle
Challenge: hurt, to hurt at [livejournal.com profile] sylelle_100
Notes/Warning: Season 3. Some sexual implications.

Summary: This time Sylar decided to do something different.



It had been awhile, but Sylar noticed the distinction.

His hands were made for exploring, for dismantling – for murder. His fingers flexed into a fist, anxious, yet not for blood. Right now he didn’t want to hurt anyone.

Elle sighed and rocked beneath him. A deep breath passed through his own lips, and his eyes closed as kisses trailed over the skin on his chin. He moved his hands around her, searching for softness.

She moaned underneath him, and she stared into his eyes. He pulled her closer, and this time, he decided to do something different.

Sylar was gentle.

[identity profile] mollivanders.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, very introspective look into his head :) Great job!

[identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 05:24 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] superkappa.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 12:31 am (UTC)(link)
I love how you took the prompt of hurting or to hurt and kind of twisted it around. This is a great look into the Canfield house scene :)

[identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 05:24 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! :)

[identity profile] di-elle.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
Kudos to you too for a not angsty answer to the prompt! :)
I really like how you reversed it here.
What I like most is the focus on his hands, I can see them moving.

[identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 05:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It was a challenge to not be too dramatic. Haha.
ext_317107: (Heroes; Sylar; you knew from the start)

[identity profile] stainofmylove.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 06:42 am (UTC)(link)
This is great. Hands that express hatred can just as easily express love, if Sylar would let them.

[identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 01:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D

[identity profile] havemy-heart.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay for something not angsty with these two :) I like this a lot.

[identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, darlin! <3

[identity profile] landofthekwt.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
You should be writing for Heroes. This is way the episode should have gone.
Instead he let Bennett influence him into killing Elle.

[identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com 2009-12-03 07:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, that's a great compliment. Thanks!

[identity profile] disalae.livejournal.com 2009-12-04 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely interpretation of the prompt, and well, darn, almost just plain sweet. As sweet as it gets with them, right? I really enjoyed it <3

[identity profile] quirkysmuse.livejournal.com 2009-12-04 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Aww, I'm glad you thought it was sweet. That doesn't happen too often with them does it? :D Thanks again!